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Critique Peer Review

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Thesis statements

1. The following will summarize the article, evaluate the

article, and have a personal response on the article.

2. In the article, “The Death Penalty Debate,” PatriciaSmith writes about capital punishment and the

controversial reason some might oppose to it while othersconcur that the death penalty is the just thing to do.

3. In Sean Gregory’s “Should This Kid Be Making $225, 047A year for Playing College Football?” his writing delvesinto many different subjects on the current state ofcollege athletics like the people who are benefiting themost from unpaid student athletes, Johnny Manziel, andsome reasons on why student athletes are not currently

paid.

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Thesis statements

4. The issue of elderly driving will be analyzed bylooking at a brief summary of Anderson’s article, acritique of Anderson’s article, and my personal stanceand opinions on this controversial issue.

5. High unemployment of college graduates andoutstanding student loan debts are reasons for someto reconsider their future plans and find out whicheducational route is best for them.

6. This paper will demonstrate the economic andenvironmental benefits of hunting on the local andnational levels.

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Thesis statements

7. Abortions is wrong, Kerby Anderson has many

points to back this statement.

8. In the article “Why I’m Against Gun Control,”

Peter Tucci covers important topics on thecontroversy of gun control and why he is not a

supporter.

9. Euthanasia should be a given right, especially tothose who are terminally ill and live their lives so

close to the edge of death.

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10. Lowering the drinking age would cause more harm to not

only the young adults, but to the whole society.

11. The passage will include a brief summary, an assessment ofKinsley’s performance, and a personal response from the writer.

12. While reflecting on Cuomo’s article, there is some evidenceto support his argument, but his lack of elaboration on some ofthe main points and his biased opinion harms the strength ofthe validity of the argument.

13.Although profanity does effect players’ aggression andbehavior, different variables such as past exposure to videogames, amount of video games played per day, and theprotagonist or antagonist use of profanity can help the effect of

profanity in video games.

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Read sample essay 

Rip it! What’s done poorly? Applaud it! What’s done well?

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Exchange essays

Complete peer review sheet

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For Tuesday…

Grammar Portfolio #1 due Critique final copy due

Rubric, final copy, prewrite, plan, rough draft, peer review

Summary mulligans due

Read chapter 6 about analysis writing

Seriously…make sure to read it